Film Opening Feedback

As a class we watched all of the productions and filled out evaluation sheets consisting of each production's strengths and weaknesses. The feedback that we received from our peers are as follows:

Strengths

Both the flashbacks and the effects used on it was the most liked factor of our film.
The background music helped suggest the genre of the film and helped build tension.
A range of camera shots, such as the extreme close up on the bracelet.
Props and costume were appropriate.

Weaknesses

The speech that was used at the end was slightly muffled and unclear as there was some diagetic sounds in the background.
The ending title was suggested to be of a different layout.
Most importantly, the most common improvement suggested was that we add some transitions in the film.

After reading through the evaluations we have decided to improve the film by adding a voiceover at the end (the voiceover was provided by Mustafa), so that the speech is clearer and understandable without the diagetic sounds.